||BurntClan|| ||Determined and Swift||

[LehDerpyMoon]

||INTRO ~ LONER/ROGUE VIEW||
You are padding through a strange forest. Here and there a thick, dark mist swirls, reaching out cold tendrils to snatch at your fur. Sometime, long in the past, there must have been a fire: because none of the trees are living. They are burnt, bone-white skeletons of their former selves. They curve up out of the ground like wicked claws. The ground is a layer of soft peat and earth, muting your pawsteps. It is also rather springy; you don't leave pawprints. There are no birds here, but plenty of evidence of land prey - a burrow here, droppings there.
You hear a rustling of leaves behind you, and freeze. Then you dart around to face whoever is sneaking up on - and let yourself relax when you see it's just a rusty-colored squirrel rooting around for food. You've recently had a meal, and are full and content, so you decide to let it be. You turn back the way you were headed, anxious to get out of this place - and find yourself staring into a pair of glimmering amber eyes set in a narrow gray face.
"Hello," the strange cat purrs in a rich, seemingly too-friendly voice before you have time to do anything. "I must inform you that you are trespassing on BurntClan territory." The voice isn't friendly anymore - it's downright menacing. "If you wish to join us, you are welcome. Otherwise, kindly leave now, or I'm afraid the consequences will be-" the cat grins wickedly - "quite severe."

||INTRO ~ KIT VIEW||
The comforting darkness of the nursery surrounds you. Soft, warm shapes press against you on all sides - the other kits. You are curled up against the biggest shape - your mother. The loud, rhythmic beat of her heart is comforting, and it beckons for you to fall back into the lull of sleep. But you feel there is something you have to do first. You tilt your head up, and feel your mother's tongue rasping over your eyes. You lean against her and strain your face, and - there! Your eyes are open. The first thing you see is your mother's kind, gentle face staring down lovingly at you. She runs her tail along your spine and whispers, "Welcome to BurntClan, little one. You're safe here." You close your eyes, purring, and snuggle even deeper into her fur, letting sleep take you away once more.

||RULES||
~Follow Brave’s Rules~
~No Swearing. Warrior Swears Are Allowed: Mouse-brain, Foxdung, etc.~
~Do Not Beg Or Whine. This Means No: I wanted to be Deputy! Why didn’t you pick me? Please pick me!!!!1!!~
~Please Try To Keep Genders More Or Less Balanced. This Means There Can’t Be 15 She-cats And 5 Toms~
~You May RP As Many Characters As You Like, But Only One Important Position, And Please Try To Be Active With Them All~
~If You Have Read The Rules, Put The Words ‘Narwhals Are Epic’ In Your Post~
~When Speaking OOC (Out Of Character) Please Use () (()) {} {{}} [] [[]] Or Something Like That
~Please Keep Ages Reasonable. In Most RPs, I See Most Cats In The 15-25 Moon Range. It Is Completely Normal To Have A 40 Moon Old Cat That Is Not An Elder. Think About It: 40 Moons Is Less Than Four Years~
~Please Be Realistic. No Purple Fur Or Wings Or Rainbow Eyes~
~Please Use Proper Grammar. No Text Talk~
~If You Play An Important Position And You Do Not RP For Two Weeks, I Am Allowed To RP Your Character Until You Come Back~
~If You Do Not RP For A Month, Your Character(s) Will Be Put On The Inactive List. When You Come Back, Your Character Will Be Put Back Into The Regular Allegiances~
~Every Other Sunday, Each Cat Will Age One Moon~
~If You Want Your Character To Be Related To Someone Else's Cat, Just Ask! They Might Say Yes. But Please Don't Be Mad If They Say No~
~I Must Post At Least Every Page. If A Page Of Posts Has Been Made And I Haven’t Posted, Do Not Post Until I Do~
~If You Have Read The Rules, Ignore The Other Rule And Do Not Put ‘Narwhals Are Epic’ In Your Post~
~Please Read All The Information, Including Rules, History, Intro, etc. Before Joining~

||HISTORY||
Long ago, at the dawn of the first five Clans: RiverClan, ShadowClan, WindClan, ThunderClan, and SkyClan, there lived a disorganized band of cats, far away from the Clans. They lived in a lush, beautiful forest. But the strongest of the cats, a heartless tom called Stone, made himself the leader. Any who challenged him were killed. Young cats had to fend for themselves when they turned six moons old. Occasionally, others would be willing to help them – not often, though. Everyone hated Stone, but wouldn’t dare speak up against him. But one courageous young tom, Flame, had a plan. He went around in secret, talking to the cats who hated Stone the most. He said that they, as a group, would rise up against Stone. When the time came to confront him – nobody was there except for Flame and a young she-cat named Dove. The others had been too afraid to come. Flame and Dove bravely attacked Stone. Others, encouraged by their bravery, joined in, and finally were able to kill Stone.
Flame had heard of the four Clans. He decided to make this group of cats the sixth Clan, FlameClan. Dove, now Doveshine, became his mate. FlameClan lived in peace for many long seasons. But then, when Flamestar was old, a forest fire struck. It demolished every tree and blade of grass; except for one large oak. FlameClan suffered terrible losses. Doveshine, along with many others, had perished in the blaze. Flamestar was heavily burned, and soon died. But his one last wish for the Clan was that it change its name to BurntClan, to honor all the brave Warriors that the Great Fire, as it was called, had claimed.

||TERRITORY||
BurntClan’s territory is a forest of burnt, bone-white trees that curve up out of the ground like wicked claws, the result of a long-ago fire that is now referred to as the Great Fire. Thick, dark mists swirl here and there. Occasional scraggly bushes can be found, along with a few drooping flowers. The ground is a soft, springy layer of peat and earth. A shallow yet fast-flowing river cuts through the territory. The Burial Grounds are a flat, treeless area near the calmest part of the river. The Training Valley is a gently sloping valley near camp. The undergrowth is very dense there. The most romantic spot in BurntClan territory is the Flower Meadow, a treeless area where many flowers grow. There is one living tree in the territory: a towering, ancient oak. It doesn’t have a special name; it’s just called the Oak. BurntClan camp, in the center of the territory, is built around the Oak.


||CAMP||
BurntClan’s camp is located in the center of the territory, right next to the Oak. The Leader addresses the Clan from the Oak’s lowest branch, called the Oak Branch. The camp is surrounded by a thick wall of brambles. The entrance is a gap in the brambles near the Apprentices’ Den; opposite the Nursery and the Oak.
Leader’s Den ~ The large branch of the Oak where the Leader addresses the Clan, called the Oak Branch.
Medicine Cat’s Den ~ A large space under the outcropping of a boulder. The herbs are stored in a hole at the base of the boulder.
Warriors’ Den ~ A huge fernbush.
Apprentices’ Den ~ A hollow fallen log.
Nursery ~ A thick bramble bush. The inside is lined with ferns.
Elders’ Den ~ A hollow at the base of the Oak.
Fresh-kill Pile ~ A tree stump in the center of camp.

||PLOT||
There is currently not a plot. For now, we will just RP like any other Clan. But when the plot does come, it will involve Stone and the Dark Forest. NOTE: RiverClan, ShadowClan, WindClan, ThunderClan, and SkyClan have died out long ago.

||PROPHECY||
As of yet, there is not a prophecy. It shall be made much later. Right now, please don’t ask to be in it. When it is made, I will be accepting people for it. Also, please don’t give suggestions right now. I will accept suggestions when I am ready.

||PREY||
Mice ~ Very Common
Squirrels ~ Very Common
Shrews ~ Common
Voles ~ Common
Lizards ~ Uncommon
Hares ~ Uncommon
Snakes ~ Rare
Crows ~ Rare
Wrens ~ Very Rare
Hawks ~ Very Rare

||ENEMIES||
Badgers ~ Uncommon
Foxes ~ Uncommon
Dogs ~ Rare
Twolegs ~ Very Rare


||SEASON||
Greenleaf. It is very warm. Prey is abundant. All the bushes and flowers are in full bloom.

||Weather||
It is sunny, with fluffy white clouds occasionally skidding across the sky.

||FORM||
SN:
Cat's Name:
Gender:
Rank:
Age in moons:
Description (include eye color):
Personality:
History (opt.):
Crush:
Mate:
Kits:
Other family:
Other (opt.):


||STARCLAN ~ DARK FOREST FORM||
SN:
Cat's Name:
Gender:
Age when died:
Cause of death:
StarClan or Dark Forest?:
Description (include eye color):
Personality:
History (opt.):
Crush:
Mate:
Kits:
Other family:
Other (opt.):

[LehDerpyMoon]

||ALLEGIANCES||
Leader Coyotestar ~ Sleek, elegant light gray she-cat with a long, fluffy tail. Narrow face with glimmering amber eyes. Coyotestar is kind and understanding, but she is also dryly humorous at times. She can be very secretive. But above all, she's loyal to and fiercely proud of her Clan. Don't insult BurntClan where she can hear, or you'll be sorry. 51 moons. 6 lives left. ||Icemoon||
Deputy To be chosen by me.
Medicine Cat None
Medicine Cat Apprentice None
Warriors Reedsnap ~ Muscular, battle-scarred bright ginger tom. Hazy green eyes. Black muzzle with long teeth. Proud and courageous. Very strong in battle, though not as much in hunting. He isn't a very patient cat. Has a strange soft spot for kits. 56 moons. ||Icemoon||
Larkwave ~ Small tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with dainty, reddish paws. He back left paw is slightly twisted, making her a little slow, but she is very silent, and is a good hunter. Captivating dark blue eyes. She is a shy, nervous cat, and is rather OCD, always fussing over organization. She has made it her personal job to keep the Fresh-kill Pile in order. She is very witty, and if you insult her, she'll have a stinging retort - though she often regrets it later. 32 moons. ||Icemoon||
Apprentices None
Queens None
Kits None
Elders Finchfang ~ Red tabby tom with a short tail and a blunt muzzle. His left upper fang was broken off in a battle, but his right one is very sharp. Captivating dark blue eyes. He is very demanding and snappish, but he only acts like this to mask his loneliness. Ever since his mate, Coralfur, died, he has felt more alone than ever. 70 moons. ||Icemoon||

||MENTORS ~ APPRENTICES||
None

||CRUSHES||
None

||MATES||
Coyotestar <3 Reedsnap
Finchfang <3 Coralfur
Flamestar <3 Doveshine

||OTHER FAMILY||
Coralfur [Deceased] and Finchfang are the parents of Larkwave
Stone and Shadowtail are brothers.

||STARCLAN||
Coralfur ~ Tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with dull amber eyes. Sweet and loyal, though can be quite stubborn at times. Age when died: 64 moons. Cause of death: Whitecough. ||Icemoon||
Flamestar ~ Fiery ginger tom with a tabby-striped tail and lively hazel eyes. Fiercely loyal and caring; wants what's best for everyone. But he doesn't willingly accept help from others; he wants his own ideas to work. Age when died: 49 moons. Cause of death: Severe burns after the Great Fire. ||Icemoon||
Doveshine ~ Dusky light gray she-cat with a white head, tail, and legs. Friendly amber eyes. Shy but inquisitive. Has a strong sense of right and wrong. Often rushes blindly into things, without considering the possible consequences first. Age when died: 42 moons. Cause of death: Perished in the Great Fire. ||Icemoon||

||DARK FOREST||
Leader Stone ~ Huge dark gray tom with scars everywhere, including a large one across his left eye. Sickening green eyes. Cold and heartless, cares nothing for others. Has a severe case of blood-lust, and fights whenever possible. Age when died: 42 moons. Cause of death: Overwhelmed by too many cats. ||Icemoon||
Warriors (Cats that have died and gone to the Dark Forest, or living cats that have proven their worth) Shadowtail ~ Large dull, hazy brown tom with a short pitch-black tail. Small slate-gray eyes. He can be rather nervous at times, but is still very ruthless. He was one of Stone's closest followers in life: and also his brother. When Stone was killed, Shadowtail lied and said the he wasn't loyal to Stone. But in truth he was, and killed two kits in revenge. He thought he had done it in secret, but an apprentice saw him and told Flamestar. Shadowtail was immediately exiled. Age when died: 42 moons. Cause of death: Killed by a badger shortly after being exiled. ||Icemoon||
Apprentices (Living cats that have not yet proven their worth) None

||DARK FOREST MENTORS ~ APPRENTICES||
None

||INACTIVE LIST||
None ~ Let's try to keep it that way!

||MEMBERS||
Icemoon ~ Coyotestar, Reedsnap, Larkwave, Finchfang, Coralfur, Flamestar, Doveshine, and Stone, and Shadowtail.

[LehDerpyMoon]

Open! c:

[smoryninjeh]

i'll join because you joined my RP XD
SN:smoryninjeh
Cat's Name:Smory
Gender:Female
Rank:Helper?
Age in moons: 20
Description (include eye color): heres a picture? i1187.photobucket.com/albums/z388/WoodlennDaWolfy/RC3.png
Personality:calm with a good sense of humor and a kind gentle heart. she is strong in the soul
History (opt.): she was removed from her first clan for being a "freak"
Crush:nokitty
Mate:nokitty
Kits:none
Other family:mother, father, brother X
Other (opt.): shes the size of a border collie xD

[snowlight]

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Snowlight
Gender: she-cat
Rank: warrior
Age in moons: 22 moons
Description (include eye color): a snowy white she-cat with silver markings on her front left paw, has blue eyes
Personality: a bit shy, sometimes sound cold, loyal and brave to the Clan, smart(although she can sometimes make mistakes), opposite of her brother, Pebblesplash
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: n/a
Mate: n/a
Kits: n/a
Other family: Pebblesplash(brother), Iceburn(sister-in-law/in starclan), Splashpaw(neice)
Other (opt.): n/a

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Pebblesplash
Gender: tom
Rank: warrior
Age in moons: 22 moons
Description (include eye color): a blue-gray tom with warm blue eyes
Personality: a fun-loving tom, still loyal to the Clan, tries to get his sister to get into the fun too.
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: n/a
Mate: Iceburn
Kits: Splashpaw
Other family: Snowlight(sister)
Other (opt.): n/a

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Iceburn
Gender: she-cat
Age when died: 21 moons
Cause of death: she was ambushed by a couple of rouges, she couldn't fend them all off.
StarClan or Dark Forest?: StarClan
Description (include eye color): a white she-cat with patches of black, amber eyes
Personality: n/a
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: n/a
Mate: Pebblesplash
Kits: Splashpaw
Other family: Snowlight(sister-in-law)
Other (opt.): n/a

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Splashpaw(can her warrior name be Splashtalon?)
Gender: she-cat
Rank: apprentice
Age in moons: 8 moons
Description (include eye color): a blue-gray she-cat with amber eyes
Personality: follows after her dad, she is playful and loves to have fun but can be serious, she loves her family to death
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: Eaglepaw
Mate: n/a
Kits: n/a
Other family: Snowlight(aunt)
Other (opt.): n/a

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Eaglepaw(can his warrior name be Eaglefeather?)
Gender: tom
Rank: apprentice
Age in moons: 9 moons
Description (include eye color): a brown with streaks of white on his pelt with striking amber eyes, he has sharp claws just like his brother
Personality: n/a (too lazy to make something up although if I have too, I'll put something in, just tell me too)
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: Splashpaw
Mate: n/a
Kits: n/a
Other family: Hawkpaw(brother)
Other (opt.): n/a

SN: snowlight
Cat's Name: Hawkpaw
Gender: tom
Rank: apprentice
Age in moons: 9 moons
Description (include eye color): brown and black streaks on his back and legs, sharp claws, and friendly amber eyes
Personality: n/a (same reason as his brother)
History (opt.): n/a
Crush: n/a
Mate: n/a
Kits: n/a
Other family: Eaglepaw(brother)
Other (opt.): n/a

[Derpy Brave]

SN:Brave
Cat's Name:Darkshadow
Gender:Male
Rank:Warrior
Age in moons:13 moons.
Description (include eye color):Jet black tom, muscular, and dark green memorizing eyes.
Personality:Appears very kind and caring on the outside, but in the inside is a mess, he is unable to control his feelings.
History (opt.):Brought into the Clan when a kit, because mother abandoned him.
Crush:None
Mate:None
Kits:None
Other family:None
Other (opt.):None

[snowlight]

o.o my post is long................ :/

[Froststar]

SN: Nightstar
Cat's Name: Spiritpaw
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Apprentice, can she be trained in the Darkforest?
Age in moons: 8 moons
Description (include eye color): A black she-cat with reddish-orange paws, she has pirate gold eyes, around the gold of her eyes is a bright green. (Yes, some cats do have this and it is epic!)
Personality: Spiritpaw is cold but she does have a good side, she loves fighting and is quite good at it. When she is in a bad mood it is a good idea to leave her alone otherwise she will snap at you.
History (opt.):
Crush: None yet
Mate: None yet
Kits: None yet
Other family: Nope
Other (opt.):

[LehDerpyMoon]

All accepted! I'll add soon. So many members ovo
SMORY
I AM CONFUSED
WHAT DA FLUFF IS A HELPER
Ok, for mentors:
Spiritpaw's regular mentor is Larkwave; DF mentor is Shadowtail.
Splashpaw's mentor is Darkshadow.
Hawkpaw's mentor is Reedsnap.
Eaglepaw's mentor is Snowlight.))

[Froststar]

Yay! So can we RP now?)

[LehDerpyMoon]

eeyup C: ))

[Froststar]

Spiritpaw yawned and stretched.

[LehDerpyMoon]

Larkwave padded up to Spiritpaw.

[Froststar]

"What are we going to be doing today?" She asked her mentor.

[LehDerpyMoon]

"Battle training," meowed Larkwave.